Can You Help Me Put This Into A Paragraph?

I need to put my outline in to the divide with my subject judgment (which im not authorised to change), The child looked similar to as if he had never been cared for. thats the subject sentence. Here is my outline
A.His garments were husky as well as inappropriate
1.Dirty as well as ill-fitting. Pants as well short, boots burst as well as husky by the soles.
2. Not even paid for for him — his cloak was the man’s cloak which looked similar to it came out of the trash
B. His earthy coming was careless as well as dirty
1.Hair as well long, unsanitary as well as uncombed
2.Dirty hands as well as face, husky unwashed fingernails
C. His illness was bad due to neglect
1.Lanky as well as pale
2.Crooked teeth, with bad dental hygiene
3.A bruise upon his ankle with no hosiery on
it would be great if we could assistance me put which in to the correct divide as well as have it receptive to advice great thanks.

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  1. darlene r Says:

    basically ok, though the bruise upon his ankle does not wear socks. ‘He had the bruise upon his ankle, as well as was not wearing socks. or, he was not wearing socks, as well as had the bruise upon his ankle, , or sockless, with the bruise upon his ankle…